Monday, May 4, 2015

TRENCHES DIARY ENTRY

Dear Diary 

Today is terrible, I almost got shot by a potato gun, but I dodged it because my dodging skills are good. then I went to sleep. The next morning I wrote to my mummy. A week later my friend set off some dynamite and exploded my trench on purpose. I remembered about that awful time so I took revenge and killed him although he was on my side. Then I joined Turks and killed the NZ Chief. Then I did not stay in a trench I moved to a garbage dump. After the war I was so used killing that I killed my grandma.but I got killed by a Officer.

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  3. Nice verbs, but next time try not have too much killing, please.
    --phoebe

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